Rough Cut Two

Charlotte Morrison-18
Positives

• Good use of non diegetic sound
• Good integrated titles
• Good range of camera angles, tilts, pans and close ups
• Obvious genre

Negatives

• Could have varied camera angles
• Shaky camera at some points

Mollie Rose Turkentine-17
Positives

• Non diegetic music made story clear
• good fast pace
• Story line was clearer and easier to understand
• Obvious genre

Negatives

• Can tell actor is reading
• Pill bottle out of focus
• Days should have been made clearer

Caitlin Scott- 17
positives

• Music matched and enhanced mood
• Liked the integrated titles
• Obvious genre

Negatives

• Untidy handwriting
• Sometimes it was unfocused (camera)

Steven Adcock- 16
Positives

• Good use of lighting
• Props were effective
• Good music

negatives

• Writing could have been neater
• days should have been made clearer

Ellie Rose- 15

Positive

• Understood the plot
• Good use of music

Negatives

• Only one character
• Did not understand the time frame